LOMFic - Thoughts - Gene/Sam

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Title: Thoughts

Author: DorsetGirl

Fandom: Life on Mars

Disclaimer: I don’t own these characters or their universe. BBC/Kudos do. I’m not making any money out of this.

Rating: Green Cortina for suggested sex

Word Count:  100

Summary: Gene knew how he wanted it to be, their first time.

A/N: Hmm. Bit weird, not at all sure it works. I think it was when I started writing drabbles that my writing started to go downhill. Some people use the form brilliantly, but for me it just seems to function as a lazy substitute for having the time and application to develop an idea and write it properly.

 

 

 

 

Thoughts

 

 

I’d thought about it a lot.

 

* * *

 

Tight, taut nipples; nibbles, nips, licks, lips, licking. Touching, holding, loving.

 

Draw back, draw breath, hold on.

 

* * *

 

How it was going to be.

 

* * *

 

Tight, taut tummy; smooth, stroke, touch, tease, kiss.

 

Hold back, keep calm, hold tight.

 

* * *

 

It wasn’t like that of course. Never could be.

 

* * *

 

I mucked it up - gasped and groaned, sweated and swore, rutted and roared like some primitive beast.

 

And after, quiet and close, he laughed till he cried, smiled and sobbed, and said he’d thought about it a lot.

 

How it was going to be.

 

* * *

 

And it was good.

 

* * *

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